Class feedback

From the task in class. Each group would go around and give feedback on what they felt was good and what could be improved in each video.
The comment most commonly said which was good was the good angles. And also a few groups liked the editing,
This is the full list of comments:

• everything...
• good length
• good angles
• story line
• "trippy"
• good angles
• good editing
• Cleve's acting
• Good camra angles
• editing is fast and cuts nice.

What was suggested that could be improved was mostly about the sound issues and light issues in which some bits are very hard to hear over the fire and at points when the fire was getting going it has caused a clip or two to be quite dark. However we have already blogged about how we plan to change these and we have already realised these problems. The other notable critisim was that the cuts in between at the end were too fast. This is due to the clips we have not being that good. We could of done with a lot more shots when doing the scene and so it currently looks quite strange how quickly it goes and almost too strange for example how they get from place to place.There also seems to be bits of what we should of filmed missing and so bits of the fight are not there. We plan to solve this problem with heavy editing as we are not allowed to re-film. So time will tell if it will work out or not.
By Jonny.